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I remember tenderly—that opening you
and I embrace; a casual
fondling of souls amid muted conversation (
saying something, without ordered variation—
a symphony by unison), witness
to a flowering closeness;
           calculated by scent alone
the intimation of that exquisite first stroke
—a rhythmic intersection of organs
nightly warming;
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AlannaJohan's avatar
Your contrasting of silence and casual acquaintance with the melodious sensations of romance in every form of speech makes the reader (or this reader) feel very close to the moment, while the slighty juddering rhythm makes me think of breathing intervals. Your description is so rich it feels voyeuristic to read (which I'm just dirty enough to like, hahaha!)